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[Dec. 25th, 2009|11:14 pm] |
TITLE: Welcome To The Black Parade
PERPETRATOR: HPSpontaneousCombustionTSO
SUE-O-METER:  (okay)
FULL NAME: Ara Athenadora Black Lestrange
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: "silky black", "ebony hair".
EYES: "charcoal eyes"
MARKINGS: "Slim build, yet athletic"
POSSESSIONS: a complicated family life
ORIGIN: She is a Death Eater, and wants to be with her parents and the Dark Lord, but she has feelings for George Weasley.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is friends with Draco, and was raised by the Malfoys. She had an "emotional breakdown" when Sirius escaped from Azkaban, she was in the graveyard with Voldemort during the Tri-Wizard Tournament and was later Crucioed by him for it, and she was "forced" by Dumbledore to visit her Aunt Andromeda, who screamed at her to leave. She is "secretly dating" George, and Harry and Ron need her to come talk to Sirius. She appears to be balancing a double life. It all comes out later, and Bellatrix threatens to kill her and then starts crying and apparates away. Then she wants to disown her.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "Ara Lestrange looked just like her mother. Same ebony hair, same charcoal eyes, and the same firey passion to serve the Dark Lord. Ara, however also had the same gentle temperament as Rodolphus. Although she is an irritable person, she can indeed handle her temper, if not her whole attitude. All the same, she was an excellent heir to the Black and Lestrange family, as she inheirited traits from both her dad's and mum's side. She was beautiful, no doubt about it, and she was also intelligent and brave. But most importantly she was ambitious and cunning. She was absolutely perfect in every way".
NOTES: I've gotta say I was impressed with what I was reading. Except for the obvious Sue-ness, I felt that most characters, save for Bellatrix (at points) and Draco, actually seem in character. There is potential!
( Not bad, Suethor. ) |
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[Oct. 28th, 2009|11:18 pm] |
Thanks to ![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif) darkjaganshi for this Sue!
TITLE: His gaurdian
PERPETRATOR: evanne1
SUE-O-METER:  (toxic)
FULL NAME: Ariel
SPECIES: Witch/Guardian
HAIR: "my blond hair was curled perfectly"
EYES: "blue eyes"
MARKINGS: a long deep cut on her arm from a battle with Death Eaters.
POSSESSIONS: Gryffindor's sword, a blue dress that matches her eyes, an engagement ring: "silver banded, diamond and ruby ring".
ORIGIN: Harry is her "charge". She started protecting him at the age of eleven, during the troll attack at Hogwarts. She is the last Gryffindor heir, as well. Voldemort tried to kill her once, and her parents were killed when she was three.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is not supposed to fall in love with her "charge", guess what happens? DUH DUH DUUHH! She saved Harry & Co. from the troll and then had to "explain herself". Harry and Ron accepted her, but Hermione went running to Dumbledore to tattle. Apparently this is a bad thing, and not a logical and sensible thing to do. She joins the "Golden Trio" and they become the "Golden Foursome". Only Dumbledore can not be "transfixed by her magic". She has a dream where Sirius, Lily and James thank her for protecting Harry. After Voldemort was defeated, she is allowed to be with Harry, as long as she forfeits being a guardian. Harry then proposes to her, and she says yes.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "Guardians have special powers they can heal and apparate kind of imagine it without the pop and instead white light Since I am only half guardian I have other powers I have the power of the elements, you know earth, water, air, and fire." So, despite being only "half" you have more powers? Right, that makes sense. Only she could distract Fluffy during the quest for the Philosopher's Stone. She could run through all of the obstacles, bringing Ron and Harry's unconscious bodies to the Hospital Wing. Hermione was too busy being a coward to do that. She can feel Harry's physical pain.
NOTES: Remember a little while back when I said I had found the best Mary-Sue ever? That one is the best. She is so wonderful and special that everyone is amazed by her. No one would be able to function or survive without her involvement. Also, it's movie canon, ha ha ha!
( Best Sue Ever ) |
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[Oct. 27th, 2009|03:05 pm] |
Thanks to falafelli for this Sue!
TITLE: Allyson's Journey
PERPETRATOR: hello.i'm.mia.black
SUE-O-METER: (toxic)
FULL NAME: Allyson Persephone Mandell
SPECIES: Witch/Vampire
HAIR: not described
EYES: light blue. They do not change, despite being a Stephanie Meyer vampire.
MARKINGS:
POSSESSIONS: iPod, a friend named Chloe who helps her learn magic.
ORIGIN: Wisconsin. She is Rowena Ravenclaw's heir, and is brought back in time from 2010 to 1975 to help the wizarding world as the result of a prophecy. She is trained magically within the month. She is turned into a vampire just before the start of the school year. The process is a "borrowing" of the Twilight vampires, only better.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is sorted into Ravenclaw and meets and befriends everyone important within the first 10 minutes. She is going to be paired with Sirius Black.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She can learn tons of magic in one month. She is now a vampire that sparkles in the sun, is immortal, has excellent strength and agility, more control than most newborns and can get pregnant.
NOTES: Do you remember a time when vampire Sues were not inspired by Twilight? I miss them.
( Her hunting in the Forbidden Forest would make the centaurs so pissed off. ) |
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[Oct. 26th, 2009|02:30 pm] |
Thanks to schroduck for this amazing Sue!
TITLE: Bella Snape Lestrange
PERPETRATOR: EverlastingMuse
SUE-O-METER:  (awful)
FULL NAME: Isabella "Bella" Snape-Lestrange, she will be Bella Swan
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: as per Twilight canon?
EYES: as per Twilight canon?
MARKINGS: the Dark Mark
POSSESSIONS: a pet snake named "Lumos" because it brightens her day. Sirius left her Grimmauld Place.
ORIGIN: Bellatrix and Snape's daughter. She is being taught magic by Voldemort, including the "art of killing". Gets to go live in Forks for some unexplained reason. I'm sure that reason involves Edward Cullen.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: A Death Eater. She is Harry's friend. Harry knows that she is a "reformed Slytherin", and will be "drafted by Voldemort. He wants her to share what they are planning. Then she goes to see Voldemort, where she refuses to bow to him. He forces her to perform oral sex. Then Bellatrix expresses her jealousy over this "honour". Bella decides that she has a "plan" that involves Forks.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Can use Unforgiveable curses. Taught herself Parseltongue in second year. She "excelled" at DADA.
NOTES: Instead of a plan that involves Forks, how about a plan that involves Harry "I'm to defeat the Dark Lord" Potter?
( Bellatrix is going to Forks? That's how the last few sentences read! NSFW/L. ) |
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[Oct. 25th, 2009|05:58 pm] |
TITLE: They Love Me...Too Much
PERPETRATOR:
SUE-O-METER: (toxic)
FULL NAME: Artemis Rane
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: blonde
EYES: green/hazel
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: loves cinnamon french toast. She has "the triplet of Voldemort and Harry Potter's wand", it is "holly and phoenix feathered" which means it is just like Harry's. She has a tiny, grey kitten, and a Nimbus 2001.
ORIGIN: She is from the United States. She is told that she is a witch at the age of 14. Her grandmother, Suzan, was the "most powerful witch in the world. She had invincible powers that Dumbledore and Voldemort couldn't possibly match." Grandma "decided" that Artemis would be the one who would kill Voldemort. Too bad they didn't let the Potters know, maybe they didn't have to die. Grandma gave Artemis all of her powers, and then died shortly after. Her parents got her a wand when she was a baby, and then put a memory charm on her. They took the charm off of her, and send her off to Hogwarts! Yipee!
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is "famous" in the wizarding world. Draco barges into her compartment to meet her and insult her. She thinks Harry is attractive. She also thinks that Draco "might be nice". She is sorted into Gryffindor, despite the hat wanting to put her in Slytherin. She wants to be where the "good guys are". She feels like she has a hard time fitting in, but everyone likes her and she is doing well at school. Harry is going to teach her how to play Quidditch, and she learns that Draco thinks she is pretty, delicate and nice. She is going to have to pick one of them.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "extraordinary powers" at birth thanks to her Grandmother. She could make it rain on a sunny day.
NOTES: "And if you're just reading the story for a laugh, well...IT'S NOT A LAUGHING MATTER. IT'S A VERY DEEP AND EMOTIONAL STORY." The CAPS LOCK made me laugh, as well as the story.
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[Oct. 24th, 2009|05:29 pm] |
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Thanks to the anonymous minion who sent in this Sue!
TITLE: The Undesirable | HP-FF|
PERPETRATOR: JorrieCandance
SUE-O-METER:  (bad)
FULL NAME: Ashlyn Terrance
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: brown
EYES: "her eyes no longer vibrant in their green hue"
MARKINGS: "Her face had lost it's rosy color, instead replaced by an eerie paleness that most traumatized children tend to wear, only hers would last much, much longer."
POSSESSIONS: All of Voldemort's hope.
ORIGIN: Voldemort had a potion made to make a child a follower who is able to take down Harry Potter. She was selected at random.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is going to be paired with Harry.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is going to have some special power where she can work for Voldemort, but at the same time betray him to help Harry.
NOTES: This is probably one of the most legible things I've ever seen on Quizilla.
( Why would she ever think Voldemort might keep her safe? ) |
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